Important Ebook Link Changes

My first book was launched, using Kickstarter funding, via Matador Books. That was a neat experiment, but for my needs, I may as well do things very close to on-my-own; paperbacks on CreateSpace and ebooks manually put in Kindle and Kobo stores.

I chose to discontinue ebook support via Matador Books early last week, and that means The Gift-Knight’s Quest needed to be added once again to Amazon and Kobo. I have updated the links on that book’s page to reflect the new ebook availability.

This doesn’t mean anything to The Crown Princess’ Voyage which had been my “trial run” for this kind of release.

Another thing I did recently was offer these titles to Bakka Phoenix Books in Toronto. I think they’re still putting them into the system; if not, they’re already there.

Status Report 7/18/2017

First Draft on Wattpad

If you want to know how rough a first draft is for me, you can examine Apotheosis (working title) on Wattpad.

That project began November 2016 and was resumed June 2017, in the gap time between work stints.

Info: contains violence, stands alone as a read but can supplement Gift-Knight continuity

Overhaul Paused

The next project was supposed to be working through the next draft of what could be The Masked Queen’s Journey, The Mad Queen’s Mask, The Masked Queen’s Revenge… there’s a branch point in time and space, different universes changed solely by the title of this book, and in all other respects resembling our own.

But it’s time to get my work clothes, my bag, and most likely prepare to go craft things in return for funding, so the overhaul is paused. I can’t remember the last time I felt like I had limitless energy, but it was probably an age where there was nothing serious to do with it. Except spinning around in circles very fast and being a tornado; there’s nothing more serious than that! But now I know I end up budgeting my energy when there’s full time work, and at best, I’ll only add notes to the appropriate file instead of actually changing the manuscript.

The work tends to be seasonal, so I may find myself living in a shotgun shack behind the wheel of a large automobile coming down from the physical labor at the end of 2017, but staring down the practical deadlines of March/April to finish final draft of the book, and to decide which title-universe we’re in.

Reading and Giveaways

Information for The Bookshelf 2017 event.

Reading Things Aloud

It turns out I will be reading at The Bookshelf in Newmarket. My time slot on the list is from 12:45-12:55PM. Now I’ll have to see how much material I think is ten minutes’ worth, cut it in half, and then I’ll be prepared.

Giveaways: Amazon and Goodreads

On Amazon, for US participants, we have The Crown Princess’ Debut Giveaway. Three copies with a deadline of May 15. Hope they go to good homes!

On Goodreads, for Canadian participants, we have Book Giveaway For The Crown Princess’ Voyage. That giveaway runs a bit longer and ends on the 30th.

Helping you get into the series

Upon releasing a sequel for a not-wildly-popular series, I knew it was important to help people get into it with the greatest ease, while still covering marginal overhead for people who helped me list the first book everywhere.

Until May 14, you can get The Gift-Knight’s Quest ebook for 99 cents US, 99 pence, or a buck thirty-five Canadian.

Hope that helps.

Follow this link to Amazon dot com

Follow this link to Amazon dot ca

Follow this link to Amazon dot co dot uk

The price adjustment will also be available on all other retailers where this ebook is sold by May 4, if not sooner.

Cover Reveal and Ebook Release

The Mad Queen Alathea holds her mask aloft on this trilogy-completing cover by Rona Dijkhuis.

I’ve decided to address a couple different things in one post.

Yes, that’s the third book’s cover

Since “Featured Image” is a thing on this WordPress blog, let’s go with that first. Some of you noticed, and one spoke up (hello, Maria!), about the third cover shown on my Teaser Banner Image. Yes, that’s an actual third book cover. Yes, there is an actual third book in the works.

To be quite honest, the first book had been in the works since 2008; the second, since 2010; this one, 2011. I mean something more substantial by “in the works”, such as “this project is definitely going ahead in some form”. And I can now say that instead of only having a first draft, some meaningful thought is being put into the revision process. Once this second book is good and launched, I will have nothing else to do but finish the writing I started in November 2016, and then finish the third book, in whichever order happens to work.

Alathea is depicted here as the titular Mad Queen, wearing some of her symbolic talismans of power and holding aloft her mask. A bit of the fortress details are visible, where we see some stone work but some suggestion of utilizing natural rock formations. People who read the sequel may have some idea what goes on the other end of that rope. If you’ve looked at each cover, you’ve noticed that Derek got bright colours and a clear sky, a little too fantastic perhaps to reflect what’s real but a better reflection of his mindset at some point; Chandra got cooler colours and a slightly cloudier sky; Alathea gets rough seas in the distance and signs of an impending storm. All by design.

The ebook is out

Yes, the ebook is out. Not just “pre-orders” out, but out-out.

Follow this link to the ebook’s page, for the time being an Amazon exclusive.

Early Paperback Availability

Three-cover banner by Rona Dijkhuis

Hey, seems like it’s been a while. It has! Just one quick announcement today.

If you can’t make any of the conventions this month but you want a physical copy of The Crown Princess’ Voyage (Book 2, The Gift-Knight Trilogy), then I’m here to tell you the book has already been quietly available via CreateSpace as I prepare to order copies for those aforementioned conventions.

Follow this link to the CreateSpace listing.

If you’re waiting for the ebook, you have four more days. At least you won’t have to deal with shipping!

April 2 Writing Exercise

I wonder how to make a proper disclaimer for what I’m about to compose. I guess I’ll cover the basics and hope to address anything that crops up later if and when necessary.

This is a writing exercise. It could also be a teaser for the third book. It could also be full of spoilers, yet without any guarantee that I’ll keep a single word of the text once I actually get around to the overhaul job of the third book. The first draft does exist, but large sections need to be rewritten; nothing new to me, considering what I had to do to The Gift-Knight’s Quest and at least 50% of The Crown Princess’ Voyage.

Every book in this series is rated young adult and up due to violence and some mature themes.

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Next Appearance At Ad Astra 2017

Hello, folks!

I waited a while to confirm, but I am indeed debuting The Crown Princess’ Voyage at a vendor table at Ad Astra 2017.  You can find my table in the hall outside the main room from May 5-7.

I am far from the main event, with the guests of honour being Brandon Sanderson, Kristen Britain, S. M. Stirling and Eric Choi; there’s a good lineup of past guests of honour as well. Panels abound. Lots to see.

Ad Astra happens at Sheraton Parkway North Toronto Hotel, 600 HWY-7 E, Richmond Hill, Ontario.

In the meantime, I have one of those eight-hour-a-day jobs to keep me occupied. When I’m back to live streaming and working on manuscripts, I’ll be sure to let you know.

How I Weather a Bad Review

Most of us care at least a little bit about a negative review. For me, it’s like stubbing my toe on a low grey filing cabinet that sticks out a little from under a desk; I’m probably going to yelp once per social media outlet, and by the next day things resemble their previous state. I often encounter one piece of advice which is probably best used to calm me from a most scathing takedown, but it’s not where I choose to stop.

“That’s one reader’s opinion. You didn’t write it for them, and what you wrote just didn’t work for them.”

No phrase presented there is factually incorrect, at least in my case, but let’s make sure we aren’t overlooking something important before we shrug off what we don’t want to hear. Readers often share opinions with each other, being socially connected creatures, and you can at least get an idea of what to expect from other readers who are similar to this reader. When you take note of a pattern emerging from various critiques, at the very least, it’s not going to surprise you anymore. I feel it’s less sharp of a “yelp” when I’ve seen it before and have reconciled myself to the meaning.

And when you see opposite critiques, where for example one person says you’re too long winded while another says you’re too abrupt, you get a chuckle out of knowing two different humans can derive vastly different experiences from looking at the same set of words. That’s an important lesson to consider.

My advice today is here to help you take down the “yelp” factor, if you happen to feel it.

If you plotted your feelings after receiving a negative review in a graph, y-axis being subjective units of distress (SUDs) from 0 being not-at-all to 10 being the most horrible experience you can imagine, and x-axis just increments of time marching forward from left to right, you mark where you think the SUDs are and you can connect the dots, drawing a curve (or just draw straight lines between the dots, if you prefer). For most people, bad feelings take a certain energy expenditure to maintain, so you would see the curve go up right when the negative review hits hardest, then the SUDs would generally taper down over time; other things in life take priority and you just have other things to think about instead, hopefully better things. This is all stuff borrowed from my anxiety therapy, by the way, and I feel like it can map over to this context rather cleanly.

What do I do to help that curve collapse a little quicker than it otherwise would?

I have a private blog elsewhere. Some of the things I need to write in it constitute spoilers, and others, awkward feels, so I spare the rest of you from having to look at that. However, this is just the place for what I do next. Here are the steps:

Look for the specific points or phrases that get to you the most. I know these are the last things you want to look at, but they’re the actual issue, not the fact that the review is overall negative. Reviews are words. We can analyze phrases and question meanings; review the review.

What do you feel you were doing with that thing they didn’t like? Do you think they missed your point? Your biggest asset as a writer is that you most likely remember what you meant, especially when faced with a jarring alternate reading.

Write out your thoughts. Write an essay where you address the “problem points”. Affirm what you know you intended to do, but acknowledge the possibility that the reader didn’t pick up on it. If you prefer, consider what you might have done to help the reader pick up on that better, or whether you already think you did enough. Personally, writing helps me try to make my usual recursive thinking a bit more linear, perhaps carrying a thought to an actual conclusion.

In my case, the reviewer is reviewing a “finished product” already available on the market. Understand that the text is what it is, and all you have to do is consider what you’d do different in a future project if you’ve zeroed in on any actual room for improvement. If we’re talking about beta reviews and workshops, I don’t think this post properly addresses that context.

The privacy of the blog is important. I prefer not to engage in heated public arguments with reviewers because other reviewers can pick up on the behaviour, and the optics of it… not my thing. Especially if you’re arguing against a reader’s subjective experience with your text, instead of an overlooked fact or blatant misquote. My focus here is to help you feel okay with yourself and what you’ve made, and to get past discouragement in a reasonably quick way.

Unless it’s a very high profile blog, I wouldn’t see the need. For the same reason that reviewers took a while to get to your work, that negative review post might fade into relative obscurity, buried under all those new reviews that push it off page one. If it is a high profile blog, actually, I would be even more careful than that. I would write my private blog post first to make sure I have coherent thoughts to share before going public with them.

One minor reason I prefer to solicit new reviews is because they can push old reviews under the heap. This can be good or bad; glowing reviews can meet the same fate over time, and the outcome of a new review is never guaranteed. If you don’t solicit reviews and just let them naturally come in, a benefit might be that you deal with the “yelp” factor a lot less frequently than I do. However, as far as The Gift-Knight’s Quest and The Crown Princess’ Voyage are concerned, I chose to set up reviews months ago and I’m more concerned with accepting the outcome of my choices.

Possible Future Appearances and Other Housekeeping

January felt like a time for recovery, but things proceed apace. Here’s what’s personally on the go for the first half of 2017.

Ad Astra 2017: Official Release Con of The Crown Princess’ Voyage

I hope I’m not premature in making this announcement. So I’ll hedge it a bit and say that I planned for Ad Astra to be the official release con of my sequel, I have filled out the registration and paid, and I hope for the best. Ad Astra 2017 will happen at Sheraton Parkway North Toronto Hotel from May 5 to 7. I haven’t done a 3 day event before, and incidentally not this event, so I’m really curious.

The Bookshelf, Newmarket

On May 13, one week after Ad Astra, The Bookshelf lets readers meet authors in the heart of Newmarket. I was at last year’s event, though it was a foggy and emotional day; I vaguely recall downing Pepto Bismol for some reason, and then leaving early to attend an important garden dedication at the Thornhill Village Library–neither of which have to do with the book fair event itself, which was pretty good. I’ve signed up to go again, and hopefully this time circumstances put me in better health for the outing.

The Word on the Street Toronto

And another announcement which I hope isn’t premature, so once again I’ll hedge it a bit. I had a booth at The Word on the Street in 2015 when The Gift-Knight’s Quest was just a few months old. I had experienced the event as a passerby when it was still being held at Queen’s Park, and now it’s at the Harbourfront Centre. I’d like to be part of this big fair of books and magazines and literature, and we’ll see if my registration gets approved.


For all this time my workspace has been a bit pedestrian-isolated, but warm and just doing the job. However, my current living space (which includes my working space) has too many problems that haven’t been solved after repeat attempts from contractors, and hopefully the much newer place I’m moving to won’t have such problems. My new work/living space will be a bit closer to Vaughan Mills Mall, frankly, and have lots to do in the area.

I know my 2016 retrospect was probably a complete downer, but that’s what happens when a person is open about the depths of their feelings; I’m sure other people have their things to share, or withhold, as they see fit. And 2017 is marching along, not in the happiest way geopolitically, but still.